Generally looking very good, just a couple of tweaks:

On 2013/02/12 15:06, Jeremie Le Hen wrote:
> +<li>The <a href="#DHCPserver">DHCP server configuration</a> is not
> +described yet again in this section but the addressing scheme used here is
> +the same.
> +<li>The will also be the uplink router for your bridged network, so we

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> +will use IP address 192.168.1.1 to match the DHCP server configuration.
> +<li>We will not cover the uplink, routing or firewalling configuration
> +here.</li>
> +</ul>
[..]
> +Then create the vether0 configuration:
> +
> +<blockquote><pre>
> +$ <b>cat /etc/hostname.vether0</b>
> +inet 192.168.1.2 255.255.255.0 192.168.1.255

If I understood the above paragraph correctly, this should be 192.168.1.1
shouldn't it?

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