Hi Manik Thanks for your advice - usual story - you're right I do tend to follow the same traditional story structure - start middle end - it's predictable and worth exploring new structures, though I wont be the first to try this. Doesn't keep your mind awake after consuming - that's something for me to think about
thanks again dave On 9 January 2011 12:50, manik <[email protected]> wrote: > ...ONLY ONE THING'S IMPORTANT-BEGINNING/THE END...YOU SHOW US IN YOUR COMIC > HOW THINGS DEVELOP AND THE END/IT'S ACTUALLY PATTERN OF ALL END OF THIS SORT > OF NARRATIVE/...IT'S USUAL STORY AND THERE'S NOTHING TO KEEP OUR MIND AWAKE > AFTER CONSUMING...IT COULD BE /FOR EXAMPLE...I JUST SEE THAT PICTURE ON MY > MIND- ONE PERSON GIVE BANANA TO OTHER AND SAY:,,THANKS IN > ADVICE!,,...MR.MILLER...I LIKE SOME OF YOUR DRAWN STORIES AND I HOPE YOU > WILL DO LIKE MANIK SAID IT'S RIGHT TO DO...THAT'S OUR > ADVICE...MANIK...JANUARY...2011... > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "dave miller" <[email protected]> > To: "NetBehaviour for networked distributed creativity" > <[email protected]> > Sent: Saturday, January 08, 2011 9:37 PM > Subject: [NetBehaviour] The Violence of the Scene > > > http://davemiller.org/drawings/riots/violence_of_the_scene.png > > This drawing is based on and inspired by some recent news articles, > and is mostly factual, though some bits I've made up. It's not really > finished yet, but would really appreciate feedback, and suggestions on > what I could do with it - any ideas on where I could show it/ send it? > Is the format any good, or better as a book, or a screen based thing. > I also wondered if this could make a decent computer game? > > many thanks, dave > _______________________________________________ > NetBehaviour mailing list > [email protected] > http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour > > __________ NOD32 4979 (20100328) Information __________ > > This message was checked by NOD32 antivirus system. > http://www.eset.com > > > _______________________________________________ > NetBehaviour mailing list > [email protected] > http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour > _______________________________________________ NetBehaviour mailing list [email protected] http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour
