Hi,
I have some comments on this draft.
o Section 1 says:
Each annotation is bound to a YANG module name, namespace URI and
prefix.
I think you should remove prefix. The prefix is just a local
shorthand notation.
o Section 1 says:
Annotations are indirectly registered through IANA in the "YANG
Module Names" registry [RFC6020].
This is only true for IETF-defined modules; this should be
clarified.
o Section 1 typo:
OLD:
annotations cannot be attached to a whole list or leaf-list
instance, only to individual list of leaf-list entries.
NEW:
annotations cannot be attached to a whole list or leaf-list
instance, only to individual list or leaf-list entries.
o Section 4
The text says that the server is prepared to handle that annotation
anywhere in any data tree. I think we should add "... as defined by
the annotation".
For example, the annotation "last-modified" doesn't make sense in
RPC input.
o Section 4:
Annotations modify the schema of datastores and/or management
protocol messages, and may also change their semantics.
I suggest s/schema/encoding/ in order to avoid confusion.
/martin
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