Hi, the final check of the YANG 1.1 WG last call edits has passed and so we are getting ready to wrap things up. While working on the document writeup that goes to the IESG, I found a quirks that I think we should fix before sending the document to Benoit:
1) ID nits identified two instances of 'MUST not' that should be 'MUST NOT'. 2) The capability URN registration requires to define a capability name. Right now we only provide a URL. The IANA considerations need to define the capability name, e.g. :yang-library. 3) I checked the ABNF against http://tools.ietf.org/tools/bap/abnf.cgi. Note that I had to replace '%s' with '' since this tool does not yet support RFC 7405 (case sensitive strings). Anyway, the tool does a good job and suggested these two changes: - yang-char = %x9 / %xA / %xD / %x20-D7FF / + yang-char = %x09 / %x0A / %x0D / %x20-D7FF / - relative-path = 1*(".." "/") descendant-path + relative-path = 1*"../" descendant-path In addition, the tool suggested to add a couple of parenthesis so that the reader does not have to remember operator precedences by heart. I think Martin should take a look at this and decide which ones to incorporate (or if there is even an error lingering somewhere). In addition, there was the suggestion on the mailing list to mention the change of the non-config leaf-lists uniqueness in the 'Summary of Changes from RFC 6020' which I think should be implemented. Martin, can you look at these issues and post a new I-D? Once available, I will check the diffs, finish my writeup and then submit the document to Benoit. /js On Thu, Feb 04, 2016 at 10:24:05AM +0100, Juergen Schoenwaelder wrote: > Hi, > > the YANG 1.1 definition has gone through two WG last calls, the first > WG last call did end on 2015-10-12 and the second WG last call did end > on 2016-01-06. Martin has just posted > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-10 > > which we believe incorporates all changes that were discussed after > the second WG last call. I believe the document is ready to be sent to > our AD Benoit Claise. However, before doing so, I plan to give the WG > a chance to review the changes. > > Note that this is not the time to suggest new language features or to > request changes of existing language behavior. All I am looking for is > to make sure that (a) we did not forget any agreed upon edits and (b) > that edits did not introduce any bugs or fatal errors. > > The deadline for sending in comments is Monday 2016-02-15. > > /js > > -- > Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH > Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany > Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> -- Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
