Benoit, I fixed this text in my drafts already. Actually, I found the old text difficult to read, so I fixed it like this:
The YANG module defined in this document is designed to be accessed via YANG based management protocols, such as NETCONF [RFC6241<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>] and RESTCONF [RFC8040<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8040>]. Both of these protocols have mandatory-to- implement secure transport layers (e.g., SSH, TLS) with mutual authentication. The NETCONF access control model (NACM) [RFC6536<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6536>] provides the means to restrict access for particular users to a pre-configured subset of all available protocol operations and content. (from: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-keystore-01#section-4). Related, I wasn't entirely sure how to handle the situation where a draft uses groupings from another draft. Does it simply point to the other draft's Security Considerations, or recreate them in its Security Considerations section? For now, I chose the former, for instance: The YANG module defined in this document uses groupings defined in [I-D.ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-02#ref-I-D.ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server>] and [I-D.ietf-netconf-tls-client-server<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-02#ref-I-D.ietf-netconf-tls-client-server>]. Please see the Security Considerations section in those documents for concerns related those groupings. (from: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-client-server-02#section-5) Thanks, Kent // contributor -----ORIGINAL MESSAGE------ On 3/15/17, 12:45 PM, "netmod on behalf of Benoit Claise" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> on behalf of [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Dear all, [copying the security ADs to make sure the new security section is fine] Let's separate the two issues 1. the multiple URLs in draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-12.txt Basically, I agree with Jürgen I see section 4.7: This section MUST be patterned after the latest approved template (available at http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/ops/trac/wiki/<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/ops/trac/wiki/yang-security-guidelines> yang-security-guidelines<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/ops/trac/wiki/yang-security-guidelines>). Section 7.1<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-12#section-7.1> contains the security considerations template dated 2013-05-08. Authors MUST check the WEB page at the URL listed above in case there is a more recent version available. Then, I see section 7: The following section contains the security considerations template dated 2010-06-16. Not sure why it contains this cut/paste? It should just say: the latest version is at this URL. Then, I see in the same section: This section MUST be patterned after the latest approved template (available at http://www.ops.ietf.org/netconf/yang-security-considerations.txt This page is not found. This should be corrected in rfc6087bis. 2. the new security guidelines must include RESTCONF. At this point, this is a blocking factor for the publication of YANG module. As an example, draft-ietf-lmap-yang-11<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lmap-yang/>, A YANG Data Model for LMAP Measurement Agents, on the telechat tomorrow. As mentioned the most up to date version is https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines Here is the proposal, discussed on the YANG doctors list: OLD The YANG module defined in this memo is designed to be accessed via the NETCONF protocol [RFC6241]. The lowest NETCONF layer is the secure transport layer, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is Secure Shell (SSH) [RFC6242]. The NETCONF access control model [RFC6536] provides the means to restrict access for particular NETCONF users to a pre-configured subset of all available NETCONF protocol operations and content. NEW The YANG module defined in this memo is designed to be accessed via the NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040] protocol. The lowest NETCONF layer is the secure transport layer, and mandatory-to-implement is Secure Shell (SSH) [RFC6242], while the lowest RESTCONF layer is HTTP, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246]. The NETCONF access control model [RFC6536] provides the means to restrict access for particular NETCONF or RESTCONF users to a pre-configured subset of all available NETCONF or RESTCONF protocol operations and content. Any objections? Have covered all that we need for the new RESTCONF protocol? Regards, Benoit Hi, this came up during IESG processing of a YANG module - is there a new security guideline boilerplate text covering RESTCONF? This was briefly discussed on the yang-doctors but somehow the discussion stopped because RESTCONF was not published yet at that time. I think this affects draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-12.txt. draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-12.txt has several pointers to read online documents - why do we need several points? I think some are also not working. Ideally, there should be a single stable URL. /js
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