On Wed, Mar 15, 2017 at 08:10:22PM +0100, Benoit Claise wrote:

> I like the "YANG based management protocols" part

I think 'YANG based' is not needed (and to some extend even incorrect)
and I would spell out 'network management' instead of 'management':
 
  The YANG module defined in this document is designed to be accessed
  via network management protocols such as NETCONF [RFC6241] or
  RESTCONF [RFC8040].

/js

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