Hi Authors, I have read this draft and think it is very useful. However, IMHO, there are also something need to improved. For example: # In section2 Tree Diagram Syntax, it describes " ! for a presence container", but in some draft/ RFC the container not be marked by "!", for example "ietf-interface" [RFC7223]. # And I suggest to highlight the symbol "-w", it usually appears in "input" of RPC, for example "ietf-yang-push" [draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push]
Please consider my suggestion. Best Regards! -Michael -----邮件原件----- 发件人: netmod [mailto:[email protected]] 代表 [email protected] 发送时间: 2017年6月13日 20:34 收件人: [email protected] 抄送: [email protected] 主题: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the NETCONF Data Modeling Language of the IETF. Title : YANG Tree Diagrams Authors : Martin Bjorklund Lou Berger Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00.txt Pages : 4 Date : 2017-06-13 Abstract: This document captures the current syntax used in YANG module Tree Diagrams. The purpose of the document is to provide a single location for this definition. This syntax may be updated from time to time based on the evolution of the YANG language. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
