Hi, wangzitao <wangzi...@huawei.com> wrote: > Hi Authors, > > I have read this draft and think it is very useful. However, IMHO, > there are also something need to improved. For example: > # In section2 Tree Diagram Syntax, it describes " ! for a presence > container", but in some draft/ RFC the container not be marked by > "!", for example "ietf-interface" [RFC7223].
There are no presence containers in RFC 7223, which is why "!" is not used in that tree diagram. /martin > # And I suggest to highlight the symbol "-w", it usually appears in > "input" of RPC, for example "ietf-yang-push" > [draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push] > > Please consider my suggestion. > > Best Regards! > -Michael > > -----邮件原件----- > 发件人: netmod [mailto:netmod-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 internet-dra...@ietf.org > 发送时间: 2017年6月13日 20:34 > 收件人: i-d-annou...@ietf.org > 抄送: netmod@ietf.org > 主题: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the NETCONF Data Modeling Language of the IETF. > > Title : YANG Tree Diagrams > Authors : Martin Bjorklund > Lou Berger > Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00.txt > Pages : 4 > Date : 2017-06-13 > > Abstract: > This document captures the current syntax used in YANG module Tree > Diagrams. The purpose of the document is to provide a single > location for this definition. This syntax may be updated from time > to time based on the evolution of the YANG language. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
