Hi,
I've had my first look at this draft and have a few initial comments on
section 2.1 Terminology:
It would be helpful to identify which definitions come from which RFCIt
would be worth including definitions from RFC3198 "Terminology for
Policy-Based Management" as well. For example:In Event, "rule" could be
"policy rule"Condition could be "policy condition"Action could be
"policy action"Neither "Implicit policy variable" nor "Explicit policy
variable" are defined in RFC3460, though it does introduce (but not
formally define) the following terms. Be good to properly align with the
terms in the RFC:“Implicit PolicyVariable”, “Implicitly bound policy
variable” and “Implicitly defined policy variable”“Explicitly bound
policy variable” and “Explicitly defined policy variable”It would
probably also be worth including definitions from RFC3198 for:"Policy
Decision Point (PDP)" and "Policy Enforcement Point (PEP)" - is the
intent for the server to be a PDP and PEP?"provisioned policy" - I
presume you are looking at provisioned policies rather than "outsourced
policies" (also defined in RFC3198)
I have other comments, but it would be useful to have a clearer set of
definitions to work from.
Jonathan
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