Hello Lars, thank you for your review. I have changed the sentence in section 1 para 2.
The reference to RFC 6991 is referenced by the YANG module, hence included in the citations. I have updated the URL to the non-deprecated one. Kind regards --- Alex On 7/12/2021 6:28 AM, Lars Eggert via Datatracker wrote: > Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-09: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose > to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you > did with these suggestions. > > Section 1. , paragraph 2, nit: >> s both applied configuration data as well as status and statistics. As a resu >> ^^^^^^^^^^ > Probable usage error. Use "and" after "both". > > Section 6. , paragraph 2, nit: >> ormat): HTTP/1.1 200 OK Date: Thu, 26 Jan 2019 20:56:30 GMT Server: example-s >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > The date 26 Jan 2019 is not a Thursday, but a Saturday. > > Uncited references: [RFC6991]. > > These URLs point to tools.ietf.org, which is being deprecated: > * http://tools.ietf.org/wg/netconf/ > > These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: > * http://tools.ietf.org/wg/netconf/ > > > _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
