From: netmod <[email protected]> on behalf of Marco Tiloca <[email protected]> Sent: 04 September 2023 21:24
Dear all, This email starts a Working Group Last Call for the document: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-core-comi-16 (CoAP Management Interface (CORECONF)) The document status can be found at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-comi/ Please provide your comments and feedback by Friday, 2023-09-15. This WGLC is also copied to the NETMOD WG mailing list. <tp> I was slightly surprised when I got to the IANA Considerations and found the registration of a YANG module which I had yet to see. One convention is that Appendices are Informative not Normative so I would suggest moving the YANG module into the body of the document or adding a statement to the Appendix that this is Normative and putting in a forward reference in the IANA Considerations to the module. 'This draft...' in several places YANG import lack references which need to be Normative. Simplified BSD license is OOD As is the copyright. YANG contact lacks WG details The YANG module authors are not quite the same as the I-D authors while the authors' addresses at the end are different yet again 'create or list instance,' perhaps 'create a list instance,' Tom Petch Best, /Marco -- Marco Tiloca Ph.D., Senior Researcher Phone: +46 (0)70 60 46 501 RISE Research Institutes of Sweden AB Box 1263 164 29 Kista (Sweden) Division: Digital Systems Department: Computer Science Unit: Cybersecurity https://www.ri.se _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
