Hi Tom, thank you for this feedback, which I only now get to put into the next revision of the draft. The changes marked here with a “commit” number are both in the repository ([1], see [2]) and in draft-ietf-core-comi-17.
[1]: https://github.com/core-wg/comi [2]: https://github.com/core-wg/comi/commits/main/ > On 2023-09-06, at 18:22, tom petch <[email protected]> wrote: > > […] > <tp> > I was slightly surprised when I got to the IANA Considerations and found the > registration of a YANG module which I had yet to see. Did we miss any formal steps? > One convention is that Appendices are Informative not Normative so I would > suggest moving the YANG module into the body of the document or adding a > statement to the Appendix that this is Normative and putting in a forward > reference in the IANA Considerations to the module. Added statement in c72d08c, forward references in 790e8e7 > 'This draft...' in several places Oops: 78521d0 > YANG import lack references which need to be Normative. commit: 7d5784f > Simplified BSD license is OOD commit: 5795b5a > As is the copyright. commit: d3c50b3 > YANG contact lacks WG details > > The YANG module authors are not quite the same as the I-D authors while the > authors' addresses at the end are different yet again There were indeed a few updates needed to author and contact information. commit: 542f3c8 > 'create or list instance,' > perhaps > 'create a list instance,' commit: 50b6a1b Thank you again for this review! Grüße, Carsten _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
