Thanks Tom, I like your suggestion and suggest this...
'This document defines YANG modules to assign traffic received as Ethernet/VLAN framed packets to sub-interfaces using fields available in the Ethernet/VLAN headers. ' -scott. -----Original Message----- From: tom petch <[email protected]> Sent: Monday, September 23, 2024 6:12 AM To: Lou Berger <[email protected]>; NETMOD Group <[email protected]> Cc: NetMod WG Chairs <[email protected]> Subject: [netmod] Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang-14 AND draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model-11 From: Lou Berger <[email protected]> Sent: 17 September 2024 23:01 All, This starts working group last call on https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model/ <tp> A bit outside my comfort zone but... I get stuck on the first sentence of the Abstract 'This document defines YANG modules to add support for classifying traffic received on interfaces as Ethernet/VLAN framed packets to sub-interfaces based on the fields available in the Ethernet/VLAN frame headers. ' 'Add support for classifying ... as ... to .. ' Whoops - I classify 'as' so do not expect another 'to' which implies assignment to me. Perhaps 'This document defines YANG modules to allocate(?assign) traffic received as Ethernet/VLAN framed packets to sub-interfaces using fields available in the Ethernet/VLAN headers. ' Tom Petch Note: the IPR call is running in parallel with this LC as no IPR was previously disclosed. The working group last call ends on October 1st. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome! This is useful and important, even from authors. Thank you, Lou (Co-Chair & doc Shepherd) _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
