Hi Kent,
Please see inline.
Cheers,
Med (as author)
De : Kent Watsen <kent+i...@watsen.net>
Envoyé : vendredi 16 mai 2025 17:06
À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>
Cc : netmod@ietf.org
Objet : Re: [netmod] 1-week WGLC on rfc6020-iana-update
Hi Med,
See comments inlined below.
New comment: The Security Considerations section suggests that the document
performs just one action, yet it performs two. Please update the SC section so
that it's clear about what actions the document performs.
[Med] You are correct that we have two IANA actions, but the Sec cons does not
reason with actions but talks about "an update to an IANA registration
procedure defined in {{!RFC6020}}", which is correct. We have only one update
to RFC6020. The second action is a consequence of that update in the registry.
Kent // contributor
If this document, in Section 3.1, moves
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-25#section-5.2,
[Med] This one is not moved. It is still in 8407bis. This is a refresh
ofhttps://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8407#autoid-83 (same purpose, same
reasoning)
Confused. That link points to Section 5 (IANA Considerations).
[Med] Confirm this is about Section 5 of 8407. That section has the following:
The following assignment was detailed in
[RFC6087<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc6087>] and has been
updated by IANA in the "YANG Module Names" registry. This document
has also been added as a reference for the "YANG Module Names"
registry itself as it contains the template necessary for
registration in Appendix
B<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8407#appendix-B>.
which is refreshed in 5.2 of the 8407bis.
Also, where in rfc8407bis is Section 3.2 coming from?
[Med] Please check
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-23&url2=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-24&difftype=--html.
This used to be Section 5.3.
I see it now. Thanks.
[Med] :-)
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