Hi all, I have gone through the whole document, and I don't have major comments except for the following.
In Section 4.4 Multiple domains, would it make sense to mention something about "integration/harmonization of different management domains"? A key example comes from Mobile Edge Computing, which, according to ETSI, comes with its own "MANO" system, but the example can be generalized to other similar cases. Kind regards, Fabio > > > > *From:* Nfvrg [mailto:[email protected]] *On Behalf Of *Diego R. > Lopez > *Sent:* 28 April 2017 18:14 > *To:* [email protected] > *Subject:* [Nfvrg] Research Group Preparation (a.k.a. "Last Call") for > draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps-network-virtualization > > > > Hi, > > > > As discussed and agreed in our meeting in Chicago, this message is to open > the equivalent of a last-call for our draft on NFV research challenges ( > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps- > network-virtualization/). Note I use the term “equivalent to last-call”, > as the IRTF process described in RFC 5743 uses the term “Research Group > Preparation”. Let me remind you the summarized IRTF process as described in > RFC 5743: > > o The Research Group (RG) performs a thorough technical and > > editorial review of the document and agrees it should be > > published. > > > > o The Internet Research Steering Group (IRSG) reviews the document > > and approves it for publication. > > o The Internet Engineering Steering Group (IESG) reviews the > > document to assure that there are no conflicts with current or > > expected standardization activities. > > > > o The document is submitted to the RFC Editor for publication. > > So we are starting the first step above, and all of you are encouraged to > review the document and share your comments and opinions about moving it > forward towards publication. Since it is advisable to put a deadline for > this kind of process, let’s go for a one month period, that is until the > 28th May. > > > > Be goode, > > > > -- > "Esta vez no fallaremos, Doctor Infierno" > > Dr Diego R. Lopez > Telefonica I+D > http://people.tid.es/diego.lopez/ > > e-mail: [email protected] > Tel: +34 913 129 041 <+34%20913%2012%2090%2041> > Mobile: +34 682 051 091 <+34%20682%2005%2010%2091> > ---------------------------------- > > > ------------------------------ > > > Este mensaje y sus adjuntos se dirigen exclusivamente a su destinatario, > puede contener información privilegiada o confidencial y es para uso > exclusivo de la persona o entidad de destino. Si no es usted. el > destinatario indicado, queda notificado de que la lectura, utilización, > divulgación y/o copia sin autorización puede estar prohibida en virtud de > la legislación vigente. Si ha recibido este mensaje por error, le rogamos > que nos lo comunique inmediatamente por esta misma vía y proceda a su > destrucción. > > The information contained in this transmission is privileged and > confidential information intended only for the use of the individual or > entity named above. If the reader of this message is not the intended > recipient, you are hereby notified that any dissemination, distribution or > copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received > this transmission in error, do not read it. Please immediately reply to the > sender that you have received this communication in error and then delete > it. > > Esta mensagem e seus anexos se dirigem exclusivamente ao seu destinatário, > pode conter informação privilegiada ou confidencial e é para uso exclusivo > da pessoa ou entidade de destino. Se não é vossa senhoria o destinatário > indicado, fica notificado de que a leitura, utilização, divulgação e/ou > cópia sem autorização pode estar proibida em virtude da legislação vigente. > Se recebeu esta mensagem por erro, rogamos-lhe que nos o comunique > imediatamente por esta mesma via e proceda a sua destruição >
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