Hi Fabio, Thanks for your review. Regarding your point about Section 4.4, I agree with that. We'll add text to address it in the next revision.
Thanks, Carlos On Tue, 2017-05-30 at 14:31 +0200, Fabio Giust wrote: > Hi all, > > I have gone through the whole document, and I don't have major > comments except for the following. > > In Section 4.4 Multiple domains, would it make sense to mention > something about "integration/harmonization of different management > domains"? A key example comes from Mobile Edge Computing, which, > according to ETSI, comes with its own "MANO" system, but the example > can be generalized to other similar cases. > > Kind regards, > Fabio > > > > > > > From: Nfvrg [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Diego R. > > Lopez > > Sent: 28 April 2017 18:14 > > To: [email protected] > > Subject: [Nfvrg] Research Group Preparation (a.k.a. "Last Call") > > for draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps-network-virtualization > > > > Hi, > > > > As discussed and agreed in our meeting in Chicago, this message is > > to open the equivalent of a last-call for our draft on NFV research > > challenges (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps- > > network-virtualization/). Note I use the term “equivalent to last- > > call”, as the IRTF process described in RFC 5743 uses the term > > “Research Group Preparation”. Let me remind you the summarized IRTF > > process as described in RFC 5743: > > o The Research Group (RG) performs a thorough technical and > > editorial review of the document and agrees it should be > > published. > > > > o The Internet Research Steering Group (IRSG) reviews the > > document > > and approves it for publication. > > o The Internet Engineering Steering Group (IESG) reviews the > > document to assure that there are no conflicts with current > > or > > expected standardization activities. > > > > o The document is submitted to the RFC Editor for publication. > > So we are starting the first step above, and all of you are > > encouraged to review the document and share your comments and > > opinions about moving it forward towards publication. Since it is > > advisable to put a deadline for this kind of process, let’s go for > > a one month period, that is until the 28th May. > > > > Be goode, > > > > -- > > "Esta vez no fallaremos, Doctor Infierno" > > > > Dr Diego R. Lopez > > Telefonica I+D > > http://people.tid.es/diego.lopez/ > > > > e-mail: [email protected] > > Tel: +34 913 129 041 > > Mobile: +34 682 051 091 > > ---------------------------------- > > > > > > > > Este mensaje y sus adjuntos se dirigen exclusivamente a su > > destinatario, puede contener información privilegiada o > > confidencial y es para uso exclusivo de la persona o entidad de > > destino. Si no es usted. el destinatario indicado, queda notificado > > de que la lectura, utilización, divulgación y/o copia sin > > autorización puede estar prohibida en virtud de la legislación > > vigente. Si ha recibido este mensaje por error, le rogamos que nos > > lo comunique inmediatamente por esta misma vía y proceda a su > > destrucción. > > > > The information contained in this transmission is privileged and > > confidential information intended only for the use of the > > individual or entity named above. If the reader of this message is > > not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any > > dissemination, distribution or copying of this communication is > > strictly prohibited. If you have received this transmission in > > error, do not read it. Please immediately reply to the sender that > > you have received this communication in error and then delete it. > > > > Esta mensagem e seus anexos se dirigem exclusivamente ao seu > > destinatário, pode conter informação privilegiada ou confidencial e > > é para uso exclusivo da pessoa ou entidade de destino. Se não é > > vossa senhoria o destinatário indicado, fica notificado de que a > > leitura, utilização, divulgação e/ou cópia sem autorização pode > > estar proibida em virtude da legislação vigente. Se recebeu esta > > mensagem por erro, rogamos-lhe que nos o comunique imediatamente > > por esta mesma via e proceda a sua destruição > > > > _______________________________________________ > Nfvrg mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.irtf.org/mailman/listinfo/nfvrg _______________________________________________ Nfvrg mailing list [email protected] https://www.irtf.org/mailman/listinfo/nfvrg
