semioticrobotic commented on code in PR #26:
URL: https://github.com/apache/geode-site/pull/26#discussion_r2382450413
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website/content/index.html:
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@@ -23,24 +23,13 @@
<div class="container">
<img class="logo-title img-responsive hidden-xs"
src="img/Apache_Geode_logo.png" />
<div class="text-container">
- <h2 class="tagline"><em>Performance</em> is key.
<em>Consistency</em> is a must.</h2>
- <p class="description">Providing low latency, high concurrency
data management solutions since 2002.</p>
- <p class="description">Build high-speed, data-intensive
applications that elastically meet performance requirements at any scale.</p>
- <p class="description">Take advantage of Apache
Geode's unique technology that blends advanced techniques for data replication,
partitioning and distributed processing.</p>
- <p class="description">Apache Geode provides a
database-like consistency model, reliable transaction processing, and a
shared-nothing architecture to maintain very low latency performance with high
concurrency processing.</p>
+ <p class="description">Apache Geode™ is a data management
platform that provides real-time, consistent access to data-intensive
applications throughout widely distributed cloud architectures.</p>
Review Comment:
I would prefer to eliminate them here to avoid the "wall of text" effect
that occurs when users load the page. I like [the way Apache Airflow does
it](https://airflow.apache.org/). Personally, I believe:
* This is a lot of words where fewer could suffice, and
* If we have important points about functionality or benefits, we should
include them in the more detailed and thorough explanation in the following
site section, which seems to serve that purpose.
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