semioticrobotic commented on code in PR #26:
URL: https://github.com/apache/geode-site/pull/26#discussion_r2388961211


##########
website/content/index.html:
##########
@@ -23,24 +23,13 @@
         <div class="container">
             <img class="logo-title img-responsive hidden-xs" 
src="img/Apache_Geode_logo.png" />
             <div class="text-container">
-                <h2 class="tagline"><em>Performance</em> is key. 
<em>Consistency</em> is a must.</h2>

Review Comment:
   I'll add that this is also an attempt to more obviously follow ASF [project 
website branding and description 
guidance](https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs#branding), which states 
that:
   
   > Every product homepage and any overview download page for the product must 
include a prominent reference to the product as "Apache Foo software", and must 
include a brief, one-sentence description of the purpose and function of the 
software product itself. For example: `The Apache Xerces XML parsing library 
software provides a complete implementation of the XML 1.0 parsing 
specification, and is easily configurable and compliant with current standards.`
   
   That one-sentence description doesn't appear on the production site until 
much further "down," and I found it to be a much simpler, more straightforward, 
and less buzz-wordy description of the project (I tend to be a member of the 
"Just Say What It Is" camp).



-- 
This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service.
To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the
URL above to go to the specific comment.

To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected]

For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at:
[email protected]

Reply via email to