>todays' world.

How many todays is that? Or is this what passes for punctuation in today's 
world? ;-)

The text ain't that bad. An obvious typo, wrong tense, superfluous spaces and a 
bit of wordiness.

I'd suggest the following revision.
>The Bagpipe Museum has been housed in Morpeth's medieval Chantry buildings 
>since 1987 and is home to a unique collection, centred on the bagpipes 
>collected by William Alfred Cocks (1892 - 1971), a clockmaker 
from Ryton, near Newcastle.**
The collection now belongs to the Newcastle upon Tyne Society of Antiquaries,
and the Museum is supported by Castle Morpeth Borough Council.*

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