...and Castle Morpeth Borough Council no longer exists, but support is possibly now from Northumberland County Council.

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----- Original Message ----- From: <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, April 20, 2010 10:33 AM
Subject: [NSP] Re: morpeth museum site and more time travel




todays' world.

How many todays is that? Or is this what passes for punctuation in today's world? ;-)


The text ain't that bad. An obvious typo, wrong tense, superfluous spaces and a bit of wordiness.

I'd suggest the following revision.
*
The Bagpipe Museum has been housed in Morpeth's medieval Chantry buildings since 1987 and is home to a unique collection, centred on the bagpipes collected by William Alfred Cocks (1892 - 1971), a clockmaker
from Ryton, near Newcastle.**
The collection now belongs to the Newcastle upon Tyne Society of Antiquaries,
and the Museum is supported by Castle Morpeth Borough Council.*
csirz



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