On 4 Nov 2010, Gibbons, John wrote: 
 
> I am not convinced by g/f/e/f/g/e/ c2 e| as a bar 2 in your strain 6.

Neither was I after a few minutes, but by then I was out of the house.

> But g/f/e/d/c/B/ c2e| might work.

Indeed.

> It needs the upward movement  from B onto c2, I feel.

Agreed, I think - I'll try and play it in a minute. How about a further slight 
change, using part of the tag pattern from bar 7 in bars 1 & 3:

e/f/|g/f/e/f/g/e/ d/c/B/A/B/G/|g/f/e/d/c/B/ c2 e|\
g/f/e/f/g/e/ d/c/B/A/B/G/|dgf d2 e/f/|\
g/f/e/f/g/e/ d/c/B/A/B/G/|g/f/e/d/c/B/ c2 e|\
d/c/B/A/B/G/ B>cd|dgf d2||**

And then, of course, to be really satisfying it could do with another 2 
strains....give me a few more minutes!

Julia



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