On 4 Nov 2010, Gibbons, John wrote: > I am not convinced by g/f/e/f/g/e/ c2 e| as a bar 2 in your strain 6.
Neither was I after a few minutes, but by then I was out of the house. > But g/f/e/d/c/B/ c2e| might work. Indeed. > It needs the upward movement from B onto c2, I feel. Agreed, I think - I'll try and play it in a minute. How about a further slight change, using part of the tag pattern from bar 7 in bars 1 & 3: e/f/|g/f/e/f/g/e/ d/c/B/A/B/G/|g/f/e/d/c/B/ c2 e|\ g/f/e/f/g/e/ d/c/B/A/B/G/|dgf d2 e/f/|\ g/f/e/f/g/e/ d/c/B/A/B/G/|g/f/e/d/c/B/ c2 e|\ d/c/B/A/B/G/ B>cd|dgf d2||** And then, of course, to be really satisfying it could do with another 2 strains....give me a few more minutes! Julia To get on or off this list see list information at http://www.cs.dartmouth.edu/~wbc/lute-admin/index.html