Matthew, We have uploaded the revised draft to correct all the grammar errors based on your suggestion for the first 4 sections.
Can you please move the draft forward? Otherwise, the Transport AD Magnus Westerlund (who had reviewed the draft) would be finishing his term, and we have to start from ground 0 to re-address the comments from Transport Directorate. Thank you very much, Linda Dunbar -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] <[email protected]> Sent: Monday, June 15, 2020 6:48 PM To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected]>; Behcet Sarikaya <[email protected]>; Saumya Dikshit <[email protected]>; Tom Herbert <[email protected]>; Bhumip Khasnabish <[email protected]> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt has been successfully submitted by Linda Dunbar and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm Revision: 15 Title: Virtual Machine Mobility Solutions for L2 and L3 Overlay Networks Document date: 2020-06-15 Group: nvo3 Pages: 17 URL: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Finternet-drafts%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3f48bcb8fdf6476e721008d811867996%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637278616566101891&sdata=%2FZ92tz54YOtyaTF0xz7gNHotnPk4JuhsBECAjGqmYTI%3D&reserved=0 Status: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm%2F&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3f48bcb8fdf6476e721008d811867996%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637278616566101891&sdata=gOC0gcc2JFRGllq3%2FfThGzSpAg757S55eBhIyaGoiQ0%3D&reserved=0 Htmlized: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3f48bcb8fdf6476e721008d811867996%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637278616566101891&sdata=bUGvwvImsAP2RvwAQcAM8rhJMbV3sWogvwTM9AJblJw%3D&reserved=0 Htmlized: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3f48bcb8fdf6476e721008d811867996%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637278616566101891&sdata=VA0sZozd%2Fw5XAXJxrgOz%2Bab5DMHjVeEcOs7b1JgDGL0%3D&reserved=0 Diff: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Frfcdiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3f48bcb8fdf6476e721008d811867996%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637278616566101891&sdata=1c45%2BCy3BdjAx%2BwdHc50YVyzk1ympn9Ojg3WfgBbNLQ%3D&reserved=0 Abstract: This document describes virtual machine (VM) mobility solutions commonly used in data centers built with an overlay network. This document is intended for describing the solutions and the impact of moving VMs, or applications, from one rack to another connected by the overlay network. For layer 2, it is based on using an NVA (Network Virtualization Authority) to NVE (Network Virtualization Edge) protocol to update ARP (Address Resolution Protocol) tables or neighbor cache entries after a VM moves from an old NVE to a new NVE. For Layer 3, it is based on address and connection migration after the move. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. The IETF Secretariat _______________________________________________ nvo3 mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nvo3
