Hi Linda I requested publication back in June (see https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm/history/).
The document is with Martin. You should expect a review from him at some point. Regards Matthew On 11/09/2020, 23:48, "Linda Dunbar" <[email protected]> wrote: Matthew, Just want to follow up on moving this draft forward. All the issues have been fixed since June 17 for version -16. Can you help us? Or tell us what to do? Linda -----Original Message----- From: Linda Dunbar Sent: Wednesday, June 17, 2020 2:45 PM To: Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: RE: revised to address your suggested grammar errors in the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt Matthew, All the idnits issues have been corrected in -16 version Can you please move the draft forward? Thank you very much. Linda Dunbar -----Original Message----- From: Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, June 17, 2020 6:36 AM To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: revised to address your suggested grammar errors in the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt Sorry, one other thing: Please remove the change log section (13). Thanks Matthew On 17/06/2020, 12:33, "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <[email protected]> wrote: Thanks Linda Please resolve the ID-Nits warnings and errors first: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww6.ietf.org%2Ftools%2Fidnits%3Furl%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&sdata=J%2BwTd6OMD81EDg9ht5qlq2Yicq097adSjE2x8Y%2BkKKo%3D&reserved=0 Best regards Matthew On 16/06/2020, 00:55, "Linda Dunbar" <[email protected]> wrote: Matthew, We have uploaded the revised draft to correct all the grammar errors based on your suggestion for the first 4 sections. Can you please move the draft forward? Otherwise, the Transport AD Magnus Westerlund (who had reviewed the draft) would be finishing his term, and we have to start from ground 0 to re-address the comments from Transport Directorate. Thank you very much, Linda Dunbar -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] <[email protected]> Sent: Monday, June 15, 2020 6:48 PM To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected]>; Behcet Sarikaya <[email protected]>; Saumya Dikshit <[email protected]>; Tom Herbert <[email protected]>; Bhumip Khasnabish <[email protected]> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt has been successfully submitted by Linda Dunbar and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm Revision: 15 Title: Virtual Machine Mobility Solutions for L2 and L3 Overlay Networks Document date: 2020-06-15 Group: nvo3 Pages: 17 URL: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Finternet-drafts%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&sdata=fKMX5Jx0ZTOr0wG3ATaMfGZR5RlY54SdOdBgPBqqt%2FU%3D&reserved=0 Status: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm%2F&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&sdata=1IZF7BegNgM6QV3N%2Fbi1haSxP8wLR9nqHSnjqMP6RJY%3D&reserved=0 Htmlized: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&sdata=kpiCmthswR8GUdUiZ1WjhlmGu%2BT%2BxC8agEmJCxN%2FTSI%3D&reserved=0 Htmlized: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&sdata=IVlsNQhdKQc8K5GwAlZ2cKnR80lytIFndt54%2F31qOPI%3D&reserved=0 Diff: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Frfcdiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15&data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&sdata=N6w3ubeYbtoxRHfXq7fZafdaSksyTHMFhAxF1%2FGAKQg%3D&reserved=0 Abstract: This document describes virtual machine (VM) mobility solutions commonly used in data centers built with an overlay network. This document is intended for describing the solutions and the impact of moving VMs, or applications, from one rack to another connected by the overlay network. For layer 2, it is based on using an NVA (Network Virtualization Authority) to NVE (Network Virtualization Edge) protocol to update ARP (Address Resolution Protocol) tables or neighbor cache entries after a VM moves from an old NVE to a new NVE. For Layer 3, it is based on address and connection migration after the move. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. The IETF Secretariat _______________________________________________ nvo3 mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nvo3
