Hi Himanshu,
thank you for your kind words and suggested text. Would the following
update to the first paragraph of the Appendix accurately capture your idea:
OLD TEXT:
   Several other options of OAM encapsulation were considered.  Those
   are listed in the Appendix solely for the informational purpose.
NEW TEXT:
   Several other options for OAM encapsulation were considered.  Those
   are listed in the Appendix solely for informational purposes.  These
   options were discarded in favor of the approach described in the main
   body of this document.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Jun 14, 2022 at 3:56 PM Himanshu Shah via Datatracker <
[email protected]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Himanshu Shah
> Review result: Ready
>
> The document is well written and easy to follow.
> One suggestion.
> Appendix A describes other alternative approaches that were considered for
> informational purposes.
> It would nice to get a closure on that by stating in the last paragraph
> that
>
> "The options described here in the appendix were discarded in favor of the
> approach
> described in the main document".
>
> Please feel free to word it better.
>
>
>
>
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