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From: Greg Mirsky <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, June 14, 2022 9:44:54 PM
To: Shah, Himanshu <[email protected]>
Cc: Routing Directorate <[email protected]>; 
[email protected] 
<[email protected]>; NVO3 <[email protected]>
Subject: [**EXTERNAL**] Re: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-04

Hi Himanshu,
thank you for your kind words and suggested text. Would the following update to 
the first paragraph of the Appendix accurately capture your idea:
OLD TEXT:
   Several other options of OAM encapsulation were considered.  Those
   are listed in the Appendix solely for the informational purpose.
NEW TEXT:
   Several other options for OAM encapsulation were considered.  Those
   are listed in the Appendix solely for informational purposes.  These
   options were discarded in favor of the approach described in the main
   body of this document.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Jun 14, 2022 at 3:56 PM Himanshu Shah via Datatracker 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Reviewer: Himanshu Shah
Review result: Ready

The document is well written and easy to follow.
One suggestion.
Appendix A describes other alternative approaches that were considered for 
informational purposes.
It would nice to get a closure on that by stating in the last paragraph that

"The options described here in the appendix were discarded in favor of the 
approach
described in the main document".

Please feel free to word it better.



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