Hi,

I've posted the 1st draft of the NWAM CLI docs
on windmill.sfbay.

/net/windmill.sfbay/export/sa-docs/SYSADV2/Review

See the file, NWAM_draft1.101309.pdf

See pages 33-121

The GUI chapter is WIP and will be sent out in a couple of days.

*** See the Remarks section at the beginning of the file for
questions, items to check, and missing information to provide.

IGNORE: any comments addressed to Alysson, the editor.
IGNORE: Broken cross-references. These will be fixed
when I run tools on the content next time.

I wanted to get the chapters out now, so everyone can take
a look and we can address any glaring problems immediately.

When the team meets again, we can decide on how to
divide the chapters up for review and talk about when I
need your feedback.
Roughly, I'm looking at sometime before Thanksgiving,
but everything hinges on your integration date.
Any delays you have will impact when the doc feedback
is due. I have a drop-dead date that I will give you.

I think it will work better to split up the review
work by chapter for this 1st round.
For the 2nd round, I can send out
a revised PDF that can be generally reviewed and
commented on by all.

Let me know if you have any questions or problems
accessing the file.

Thanks much to Renee and team for answering my millions of questions.
I've still got a few missing pieces of info, but
we're much closer thanks to everyone's help.

** A special thanks to Anurag for all of his help with
the tasks, and for assisting me in installing the NWAM bits!!!

Nita


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