PS - When you review the content, you may notice some nits and typos. That's because I haven't done a thorough review of the chapters myself yet. So, do not fear, as these will all be caught and fixed (if not by me, by the editor) : )
Thanks, Nita On 10/13/09 17:05, Juanita Heieck wrote: > Hi, > > I've posted the 1st draft of the NWAM CLI docs > on windmill.sfbay. > > /net/windmill.sfbay/export/sa-docs/SYSADV2/Review > > See the file, NWAM_draft1.101309.pdf > > See pages 33-121 > > The GUI chapter is WIP and will be sent out in a couple of days. > > *** See the Remarks section at the beginning of the file for > questions, items to check, and missing information to provide. > > IGNORE: any comments addressed to Alysson, the editor. > IGNORE: Broken cross-references. These will be fixed > when I run tools on the content next time. > > I wanted to get the chapters out now, so everyone can take > a look and we can address any glaring problems immediately. > > When the team meets again, we can decide on how to > divide the chapters up for review and talk about when I > need your feedback. > Roughly, I'm looking at sometime before Thanksgiving, > but everything hinges on your integration date. > Any delays you have will impact when the doc feedback > is due. I have a drop-dead date that I will give you. > > I think it will work better to split up the review > work by chapter for this 1st round. > For the 2nd round, I can send out > a revised PDF that can be generally reviewed and > commented on by all. > > Let me know if you have any questions or problems > accessing the file. > > Thanks much to Renee and team for answering my millions of questions. > I've still got a few missing pieces of info, but > we're much closer thanks to everyone's help. > > ** A special thanks to Anurag for all of his help with > the tasks, and for assisting me in installing the NWAM bits!!! > > Nita > > >
