This version is much clearer! Nearly worthy of the version 1.0 tag
which appears as section 15.
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WORDING:
Which words in the definition of Open Game Content (section 1(d))
cover stat blocks? I would like the definition of "Open Game Content"
to explicitly include "game-mechanical description":
(d)"Open Game Content" means the game mechanic and includes the
methods, procedures, processes, routines,
>>and game-mechanical descriptions<<
to the extent such content does not embody the Product Identity and
is an enhancement over the prior art; and means any work covered by
this License, including translations and derivative works under
copyright law, but specifically excludes Product Identity.
Since stat blocks contain game-mechanical descriptions, this change
would make it perfectly clear that stat blocks should be marked as
Open but must first be scrubbed clean of any Product Identity.
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ERROR:
Section 1(e) should end with a period instead of a semi-colon.
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ERROR:
In section 1 there are items (g) and (i) but no (h).
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WORDING:
In section 4, remove the comma after the word "Use".
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WORDING:
In section 6, replace the phrase "copying, modifiying, or
distributing" with "Using".
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WORDING:
In section 8, append a period at the end of the section.
-kenan
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