On Jul 22, 2011, at 5:10 AM, Dennis E. Hamilton wrote: > If you do not choose to submit an iCLA, please report your decision to > <[email protected]>. We will then know not wait for it. > > If you are submitting an iCLA, please report your decision to > [email protected] and indicate how much time you need before > the iCLA will be sent to Apache.
I would rephrase the beginnings of those two paragraphs as "If you choose not to submit an iCLA, …" and "Otherwise, if you do intend to submit an iCLA, …," respectively. (And "not wait for it" lacks a "to.") -Stephan
