On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 9:39 AM, Stephan Bergmann < stephan.bergmann.second...@googlemail.com> wrote:
> On Jul 22, 2011, at 5:10 AM, Dennis E. Hamilton wrote: > > If you do not choose to submit an iCLA, please report your decision to < > ooo-priv...@incubator.apache.org>. We will then know not wait for it. > > > > If you are submitting an iCLA, please report your decision to > ooo-priv...@incubator.apache.org and indicate how much time you need > before the iCLA will be sent to Apache. > > I would rephrase the beginnings of those two paragraphs as "If you choose > not to submit an iCLA, …" and "Otherwise, if you do intend to submit an > iCLA, …," respectively. (And "not wait for it" lacks a "to.") > > with this proposed changes it sounds good and it is fine to contact the initial committers who haven't shown up so far. Juergen > -Stephan
