> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/pom.xml, line 61
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64902#file64902line61>
> >
> >     Incorrect indentation. Plust sll indentation has TABs, they must be 
> > spaces and 4 of them per indent.

aligned some mis-placed indents.


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 23
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line23>
> >
> >     The warning about Mac/Windows, you really mean Mac? What tweaks are 
> > required? Asking because I'm not aware (and I develop Oozie on Mac ;)

Removed it, will retain the statement as "assuming GNU/Linux ...".


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 145
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line145>
> >
> >     s/reduer/reducer/

Fixed.


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 20
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line20>
> >
> >     s/customers/users/

Fixed.


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 196
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line196>
> >
> >     actually, the job.properties file does not need to go to HDFS. it is 
> > always used from local filesystem (we should mention that)

Added a statement here about this.


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 254
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line254>
> >
> >     It would be good to explain that any variable used (${VAR}) in the 
> > WF.XML must be a valid Java identifier (more specifically, no DOTs in the 
> > name). If a variable has a DOT in the name then instead using ${VAR} the 
> > ${wf:conf('VAR')} function must be used.

Thanks for pointing that out. Added a brief note here.


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 692
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line692>
> >
> >     add a comment stating that the symlink name cannot be a multi level 
> > path, it must a be a name (no '/' in it). This means that the symlinks are 
> > always in the CWD

Added a comment.


> On 2011-12-16 21:54:46, Alejandro Abdelnur wrote:
> > branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm, line 160
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff/2/?file=64903#file64903line160>
> >
> >     How about having a paragraph explaining that all the following 
> > directories and files are created in the local filesystem and once all them 
> > are ready they are copied to HDFS.

Added a statement to emphasize this.


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On 2011-12-16 08:53:19, params wrote:
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> (Updated 2011-12-16 08:53:19)
> 
> 
> Review request for oozie, Mohammad Islam and Angelo K. Huang.
> 
> 
> Summary
> -------
> 
> OOZIE-641:  Documentation - Cookbook for using Map-Reduce with Oozie
> 
> Summary:
> https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/OOZIE-641
> 
> Changes:
> - pom.xml has been changed to fix the issue in APT where parser fails while 
> evaluating "${..}". The pom file does the post-processing of $. -> $.
> - added a new .apt source file for map-reduce cookbook. 
> 
> Pending:
> - The overall organization of all documents (sitemap for documentation) has 
> to be discussed.
> - Some external links referenced in this new document will be available 
> later. Might have to merge/integrate with other existing documentation.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug OOZIE-641.
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/OOZIE-641
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/pom.xml 1171233 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/map-reduce-cookbook.apt.vm PRE-CREATION 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/apt/quick-start.apt.vm 1171233 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/DG_Overview.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/Launcher.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/MR-Dag-WF.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/job-config.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/wc1.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/wc2.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/wc3.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/wc4.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/wc5.png UNKNOWN 
>   branches-old/ap-pages/src/site/resources/images/wc6.png UNKNOWN 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/3222/diff
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> NA
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> params
> 
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