su, 2007-05-27 kello 17:48 +0200, Attila Kinali kirjoitti: > Heyo, > > I reworked the LinuxTag posters Luc made quite a while back: > http://attila.kinali.ch/ogp/ > > poster 1 and 1_v2 is a simple move of "what" and "why" as > suggested by a friend of mine. Dunno which one i will use yet. > > Please review them and let me know if you think something > should be changed. These should be go to print tomorrow > or on Tuesday.
Hi, I'm not able to comment the content, but I have a few humble suggestions for the layout of the first poster. I would put the paragraph 'What is OGP' first on the page. It gives a good overall picture of the project. 'Why OGP' would be next to the right. There are quite a lot of dashes. Dashes don't really serve their purpose if every sentence starts with one (this is commonly warned against). 'What is OGP' and 'Why OGP' would be fine without dashes in my opinion. Dashes are best used in simple listings. The section inside a blue rectangle might be like this: .......................................... Building a graphics card -for FLOSS software and operating systems -fully-published specs -drivers that are free software .......................................... When there are no full sentences on a list, the items should start with a lower-case letter (this applies to the second poster too). I would indent the listings one space - I think it would look better that way. There's a sentence that starts 'Todays sold graphics cards'. I'm not sure about this (I'm not a native speaker of English), but should it be 'The graphics cards sold today' (or can it be either way)? The last section header is 'The Open-Graphics Card'. What about changing it to 'Open Graphics Card Features' (and using lower-case letters on the list)? I would also remove the item 'a graphics card for OSS software and operating systems (it is repetition and doesn't match with the other items on the list): .............................. Open Graphics Card Features -high-performance 2D graphics -OpenGL support -2 dual-link DVI-I -S-video TV out -256 MiB memory -PCI, PCIe .............................. Regards, Ari Torhamo _______________________________________________ Open-graphics mailing list [email protected] http://lists.duskglow.com/mailman/listinfo/open-graphics List service provided by Duskglow Consulting, LLC (www.duskglow.com)
