"why"
- You should use FOSS instead of OSS for free and/or open source
software. A lot of people make a strong point to differentiate it.
- You don't mention Intel driver ? maybe you should say that intel did
not sell graphic card.

"What"

- "The attempt to create a fully free graphics card for use in desktop
and embedded systems"
-> "The attempt to create a  FOSS friendly graphics card for use in
desktop and embedded systems"
The card it self will not be free in the first step.

The others parts are good !

Regards,
Nicolas Boulay

2007/5/27, Attila Kinali <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
Heyo,

I reworked the LinuxTag posters Luc made quite a while back:
http://attila.kinali.ch/ogp/

poster 1 and 1_v2 is a simple move of "what" and "why" as
suggested by a friend of mine. Dunno which one i will use yet.

Please review them and let me know if you think something
should be changed. These should be go to print tomorrow
or on Tuesday.

                                Attila Kinali

PS: 1000 Flyers are already printed, i hope they are enough ^^'

--
Linux ist... wenn man einfache Dinge auch mit einer kryptischen
post-fix Sprache loesen kann
                        -- Daniel Hottinger
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