Okay, I'll take you up on the Comment Away! LOL I think it sounds great except for a couple of small grammatical bits which are probably a matter of personal preference more than anything.
Under Principles Operates with wide participation and open communication, plans for its long-term sustainability, and is responsive to community need Somehow this statement seems a little unclear in terms of who or what 'its' is referencing. Of course, it could just be how I read it on first pass. ;-) Perhaps something like this (may not be the best choice): Operates with wide participation and open communication, plans for long-term sustainability of DIG, and is responsive to community need In the second statement Manages documentation via single-sourcing, a central repository, version control, and the use of broader standards and best practices. We use DocBook for text-based documents This sentence includes a second sentence which doesn't really follow the writing pattern of the other statements. Perhaps something like Manages documentation via single-sourcing, a central repository, version control, and the use of broader standards and best practices, utilizing the semantic language markup, DocBook, for text-based documents Just my thoughts after a first read. Great job overall and very clear. Robin Fay On Wed, Aug 12, 2009 at 5:49 PM, Paul J. Weiss <[email protected]> wrote: > Shannon and I now have a draft terms of reference to show you all. It is > at > > http://evergreen-ils.org/dokuwiki/doku.php?id=evergreen-docs:dig_terms_of_reference > , > and includes a mission statement, scope, and principles. Comment away! > I'll also put this on the agenda for the next DIG meeting. > > Paul > > _______________________________________________ > OPEN-ILS-DOCUMENTATION mailing list > [email protected] > http://list.georgialibraries.org/mailman/listinfo/open-ils-documentation > -- http://contentdivergent.blogspot.com
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