Hi,

I have had my arm twisted into doing some spell checking of docs.

There is one spelling error (an old over looked one)
which you could fix with this patch. (inline)


On 08/08/18 12:35, Jonathan K. Bullard via Openvpn-devel wrote:
Clarify and expand the documentation for the management interface:

* Add examples of static and dynamic challenge/response sequences in
the "COMMAND -- password and username" section.

* Expand the "Challenge/Response" section with more detail.

* Use "management interface client" throughout (instead of "management
client", which was used in several places previously).

* Clarify when both a username and password are needed, not just a
username or a password.

* Clarify that an exit with a fatal error for a dynamic C/R will occur
only if "--auth-retry none" (the default) is in effect.

* Fix a typo. ("posesses" => "possesses").

Signed-off-by: Jonathan K. Bullard <jkbull...@gmail.com>
---
v2:
  * Incorporate Selva Nair’s suggestions (thanks!).
  * Remove incorrect quotes in Example 8.
  * Use "base 64" throughout instead of "base64".

  doc/management-notes.txt | 232 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
  1 file changed, 159 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/management-notes.txt b/doc/management-notes.txt
index 96470d0..3935715 100644
--- a/doc/management-notes.txt
+++ b/doc/management-notes.txt
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@ as a client or server.

  The management interface is implemented using a client/server TCP
  connection or unix domain socket where OpenVPN will listen on a
-provided IP address and port for incoming management client connections.
+provided IP address and port for incoming management interface client
+connections.

  The management protocol is currently cleartext without an explicit
  security layer.  For this reason, it is recommended that the
@@ -104,7 +105,7 @@ be in the list, and it will cause the management interface
  to save the "forget-passwords" string in its list of echo
  parameters.

-The management client can use "echo all" to output the full
+The management interface client can use "echo all" to output the full
  list of echoed parameters, "echo on" to turn on real-time
  notification of echoed parameters via the ">ECHO:" prefix,
  or "echo off" to turn off real-time notification.
@@ -118,10 +119,10 @@ like this:

  Essentially the echo command allowed us to pass parameters from
  the OpenVPN server to the OpenVPN client, and then to the
-management client (such as a GUI).  The large integer is the
+management interface client (such as a GUI).  The large integer is the
  unix date/time when the echo parameter was received.

-If the management client had issued the command "echo on",
+If the management interface client had issued the command "echo on",
  it would have enabled real-time notifications of echo
  parameters.  In this case, our "forget-passwords" message
  would be output like this:
@@ -141,8 +142,8 @@ COMMAND -- exit, quit

  Close the managment session, and resume listening on the

managment --> management

  management port for connections from other clients. Currently,

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