Hi,
Thanks for the v2.
On Wed, Aug 8, 2018 at 7:35 AM, Jonathan K. Bullard via Openvpn-devel
<openvpn-devel@lists.sourceforge.net> wrote:
> Clarify and expand the documentation for the management interface:
>
> * Add examples of static and dynamic challenge/response sequences in
> the "COMMAND -- password and username" section.
>
> * Expand the "Challenge/Response" section with more detail.
>
> * Use "management interface client" throughout (instead of "management
> client", which was used in several places previously).
>
> * Clarify when both a username and password are needed, not just a
> username or a password.
>
> * Clarify that an exit with a fatal error for a dynamic C/R will occur
> only if "--auth-retry none" (the default) is in effect.
>
> * Fix a typo. ("posesses" => "possesses").
>
> Signed-off-by: Jonathan K. Bullard <jkbull...@gmail.com>
> ---
> v2:
> * Incorporate Selva Nair’s suggestions (thanks!).
> * Remove incorrect quotes in Example 8.
> * Use "base 64" throughout instead of "base64".
>
> doc/management-notes.txt | 232
> ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
> 1 file changed, 159 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-)
Looks good now.
The typo pointed out by tincanteksup is not a fault of this patch
but this may be a good time to fix it -- could be done at merge time?
On line 143 of doc/management-notes.txt after applying this patch:
managment --> management
Acked-by: selva.n...@gmail.com
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