I agree with Ed's comment about the updated security considerations section.
Regards, Dan From: Edward Beili [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Monday, November 25, 2013 10:24 PM To: Benoit Claise Cc: [email protected]; Romascanu, Dan (Dan) Subject: RE: AD review: draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis Benoit, I'll submit the new version in a couple of hours. There's one thing I would like you to consider for adding to the Technical or Workgroup summary: This document provides an updated security considerations section for IF-CAP-STACK-MIB Regards, -E. From: Benoit Claise [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Monday, November 25, 2013 19:21 To: Edward Beili Cc: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>; Romascanu, Dan (Dan) Subject: AD review: draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis Ed, all, First of all, as mentioned by Dan Romascanu in his write-up (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis/shepherdwriteup/), please correct this: (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? Proposed Standard. The header mentions incorrectly 'Standards Track' - this needs to be changed Below is my AD review. 1. OLD: In 2011, the IEEE developed IEEE8023-EFM-CU- MIB module, based on the original EFM-CU-MIB module. The current revision of IEEE8023-EFM-CU-MIB is defined in IEEE Std 802.3.1-2013 [802.3.1<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-05#ref-802.3.1>]. NEW In 2011, the IEEE developed IEEE8023-EFM-CU- MIB module, based on the original EFM-CU-MIB module [RFC5066]. The current revision of IEEE8023-EFM-CU-MIB, is defined in IEEE Std 802.3.1-2013 [802.3.1<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-05#ref-802.3.1>]. 2. All further development of the EFM Copper Interfaces MIB will be done by the IEEE 802.3 working group in the IEEE8023-EFM-CU-MIB module. Requests and comments pertaining to EFM Copper Interfaces MIB SHOULD be sent to the IEEE 803.3 working group. Currently, the mailing list of the IEEE 802.3.1 task force, chartered with MIB development, is [[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>]. "SHOULD" is to be replaced by "should" Justification: RFC 2119 section 6 Ed, how quickly can you produce a new version? Regards, Benoit (OPS AD)
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