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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-01-26 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04 IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -few occurrences: "pervassive"--->"pervasive" -[Page 6], Sec 1.1, "were were built "---->"were built " -[Page 12] , "scaleability"--->"scalability" x2 -[Page 16] , "unaccessible"--->"inaccessible" -[Page 29] ,"depening"--->"depending", "permited"--->"permitted " -[Page 31], "rasises"---->"raises", "encyption"---->"encryption", "visibilty"--->"visibility" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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