Meral, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for your response. I have entered an Abstain ballot on this document based on my own re-review.
Alissa > On Jan 26, 2018, at 8:32 PM, Meral Shirazipour > <[email protected]> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. > > Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2018-01-26 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08 > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC . > > Major issues: > Minor issues: > Nits/editorial comments: > -few occurrences: "pervassive"--->"pervasive" > -[Page 6], Sec 1.1, "were were built "---->"were built " > -[Page 12] , "scaleability"--->"scalability" x2 > -[Page 16] , "unaccessible"--->"inaccessible" > -[Page 29] ,"depening"--->"depending", "permited"--->"permitted " > -[Page 31], "rasises"---->"raises", "encyption"---->"encryption", > "visibilty"--->"visibility" > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson Research > www.ericsson.com > <http://www.ericsson.com/>_______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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