Meral, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for your response. I have 
entered an Abstain ballot on this document based on my own re-review.

Alissa

> On Jan 26, 2018, at 8:32 PM, Meral Shirazipour 
> <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
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> Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2018-01-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08
>  
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational  RFC .
>  
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
> Nits/editorial comments:
> -few occurrences: "pervassive"--->"pervasive"
> -[Page 6], Sec 1.1, "were were built "---->"were built "
> -[Page 12] , "scaleability"--->"scalability" x2
> -[Page 16] , "unaccessible"--->"inaccessible"
> -[Page 29] ,"depening"--->"depending", "permited"--->"permitted "
> -[Page 31], "rasises"---->"raises", "encyption"---->"encryption", 
> "visibilty"--->"visibility"
>  
> Best Regards,
> Meral
> ---
> Meral Shirazipour
> Ericsson Research
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