Dear Authors,

Thank for writing this draft and I understand the problem described in this 
draft and believe it is real problem that needs to be solved.
I have a few comments on this draft:

1.       Section 2, 2nd paragraph
The augmentations facilitate the use the resulting model in communications with 
the transport orchestrator, also known as the MDSC (Multi-Domain Service 
Coordinator) in the terminology of the framework for Abstraction and Control of 
TE Networks (ACTN) defined in RFC 8453 [RFC8453]. 
is it better to use transport resource orchestrator or resource orchestrator 
which is consistent with the first paragraph with  the following text “…full 
control of transport resources”

2.More complex deployment scenarios involving the coordination of different VPN 
instances and different technologies to provide end-to-end VPN connectivity is 
out of scope of this document, but is discussed in 
[I-D.evenwu-opsawg-yang-composed-vpn].
We have implemented composed VPN, I am wondering whether there is any generic 
solution which cover both case?

3.       Section 3.2
I think whether PE is controller by the same management system or multiple 
management systems, RT allocation is needed.

4.       Section 3.2
Is RD synchronization issue implementation specific? If yes, it should be 
spelled out explicitly

Thanks



Liu Chang
China Unicom
Email: [email protected]
Phone: +8618601102572
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