On Sep 30, 2019, at 17:17, Dmytro Shytyi <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Dear members of opsawg, Recently we uploaded a draft about uCPE management. You are invited to answer few questions regarding the draft https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt. One thing that would help with reviews is if you cleaned up this YANG module. Consider using pyang -f yang --keep-comments to generate something well-formatted, and —canonical to check ordering. In particular, your revisions are out of order. Question1: Do you find a difinition of uCPE is well explained? If no what could be improved? I think it is, but as a vendor that makes such a device, I may not be the right person to ask. What I mean is that I inherently understand the concept. It would be good if others perhaps that use such devices could weigh in. Joe You may answer: I agree with definition. OR I think it could be modified... Question2: Do you think there is enough examples of internal uCPE service and usecases that are well depicted. You may answer: The examples and usecases are well explained. OR The usecases need improvements. Question3: Do you find that yang model should stay unchanged regarding the phy interfaces. Maybe one may think about "ietf interface" instead of "phyInterface". You may answer: The yang model looks good for me. OR The yang model needs more improvements(which improvements). ______________ Best Regards, Dmytro SHYTYI ---- On Thu, 26 Sep 2019 18:01:14 +0200 <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote ---- A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Revision: 01 Title: A YANG Module for uCPE management. Document date: 2019-09-26 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 15 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf..org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01> Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01 Abstract: This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM) and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network Service Orchestrator. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>. The IETF Secretariat _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
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