Hello Joe,
Thank you for your comment.
In the new version:
We updated the existing yang model according to your suggestions(now the nits
and validation logs seem to be clear).
We expanded the uCPE management yang model with interface model from RFC 8343(
A YANG Data Model for Interface Management)
Now there are 3 yang files that you may strip from I-D:
vsym-service.yang
modified ietf-interfaces.yang (augments vsym-service.yang)
ietf-vsym-interfaces.yang (augments vsum-service.yang and has ref to "vLinks"
from vsym-service).
A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt
has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the
IETF repository.
Name: draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm
Revision: 02
Title: A YANG Module for uCPE management.
Document date: 2019-10-08
Group: Individual Submission
Pages: 40
URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt
Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/
Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02
Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm
Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02
Abstract:
This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM)
and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves
as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises
Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network
Service Orchestrator.
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---- On Mon, 07 Oct 2019 15:50:40 +0200 Joe Clarke (jclarke)
<[email protected]> wrote ----
On Sep 30, 2019, at 17:17, Dmytro Shytyi <mailto:[email protected]> wrote:
Dear members of opsawg,
Recently we uploaded a draft about uCPE management.
You are invited to answer few questions regarding the draft
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt.
One thing that would help with reviews is if you cleaned up this YANG module.
Consider using pyang -f yang --keep-comments to generate something
well-formatted, and —canonical to check ordering. In particular, your
revisions are out of order.
Question1: Do you find a difinition of uCPE is well explained? If no what could
be improved?
I think it is, but as a vendor that makes such a device, I may not be the right
person to ask. What I mean is that I inherently understand the concept.
It would be good if others perhaps that use such devices could weigh in.
Joe
You may answer: I agree with definition. OR I think it could be
modified...
Question2: Do you think there is enough examples of internal uCPE service and
usecases that are well depicted.
You may answer: The examples and usecases are well explained. OR The
usecases need improvements.
Question3: Do you find that yang model should stay unchanged regarding the phy
interfaces. Maybe one may think about "ietf interface" instead of
"phyInterface".
You may answer: The yang model looks good for me. OR The yang model
needs more improvements(which improvements).
______________
Best Regards,
Dmytro SHYTYI
---- On Thu, 26 Sep 2019 18:01:14 +0200 <mailto:[email protected]>
wrote ----
A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt
has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the
IETF repository.
Name: draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm
Revision: 01
Title: A YANG Module for uCPE management.
Document date: 2019-09-26
Group: Individual Submission
Pages: 15
URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt
Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/
Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01
Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm
Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01
Abstract:
This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM)
and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves
as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises
Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network
Service Orchestrator.
Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at http://tools.ietf.org..
The IETF Secretariat
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