Hi Med, Thanks for your comments. Please see below.
On 28.05.21 11:18, [email protected] wrote:
Hi Eliot, all,
This extension makes sense to me. I support it to be adopted in opsawg (where
8520 was developed).
That's said, this draft does not update 8520. I suggest to remove "Updates: 8520 (if
approved)"
Please find below some other comments, fwiw.
(1)
OLD:
import ietf-inet-types {
prefix inet;
}
NEW
import ietf-inet-types {
prefix inet;
reference
"RFC 6991: Common YANG Data Types, Section 4";
}
Sure, thanks.
(2) Use the prefix as defined in 8520:
OLD:
import ietf-mud {
prefix mud;
}
NEW:
import ietf-mud {
prefix ietf-mud;
reference
"RFC 8520: Manufacturer Usage Description Specification";
}
Right.
(3) You may remove the note about normative language in the description of the module given that you don't use it.
I think we need to discuss this more, because we SHOULD be applying a SHOULD on this document to 8520 so that there is no IPR confusion. And that implies an update.
(4)
OLD:
reference
"RFC XXXX: Extension for ownership and licensing";
NEW:
reference
"RFC XXXX: Ownership and licensing statements in YANG";
Corrected, thanks.
(5) Rather than using "leaf-list owners", I would define this as a list keyed by owners and which may include a leaf-list of licenses. Rather than defining license as a choice, I would use a "union".
We're still discussing the substance of this.
(6)
OLD:
"ol": {
"owners": [
"Copyright (c) FrobMaster 2021. All Rights Reserved"
],
"spdx-tag": "0BSD"
},
NEW:
"ietf-ol:ol": {
"owners": [
"Copyright (c) FrobMaster 2021. All Rights Reserved"
],
"spdx-tag": "0BSD"
},
Still working on this.
(7) Please update the IANA section as follows:
OLD:
The IANA is requested to add "ol" to the MUD extensions registry as
follows:
Extension Name: ol
Standard reference: This document
NEW:
The IANA is requested the following entry to the MUD extensions registry
available at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/mud/mud.xhtml#mud-extensions
Extension Name: ol
Reference: This document
Done. Thanks.
(8) Please update the IANA section with the following:
NEW
This document requests IANA to register the following URI in the "ns"
subregistry within the "IETF XML Registry" [RFC3688]:
URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-ol
Registrant Contact: The IESG.
XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.
This document requests IANA to register the following YANG module in
the "YANG Module Names" subregistry [RFC6020] within the "YANG
Parameters" registry.
name: ietf-ol
namespace: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-ol
maintained by IANA: N
prefix: ol
reference: RFC XXXX
What does "maintained by IANA" mean in this context? Thanks again for the update. Eliot
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