Hi all,
I support adopting this document.
Some of the comments raised back in 05/2021 are still pending. I'm reiterating
them here, fwiw:
==
(1)
OLD:
import ietf-inet-types {
prefix inet;
}
NEW
import ietf-inet-types {
prefix inet;
reference
"RFC 6991: Common YANG Data Types, Section 4";
}
(2) Use the prefix as defined in 8520:
OLD:
import ietf-mud {
prefix mud;
}
NEW:
import ietf-mud {
prefix ietf-mud;
reference
"RFC 8520: Manufacturer Usage Description Specification";
}
(3)
You may remove the note about normative language in the description of the
module given that you don't use it.
(4)
OLD:
reference
"RFC XXXX: Extension for ownership and licensing";
NEW:
reference
"RFC XXXX: Ownership and licensing statements in YANG";
(5)
Rather than using "leaf-list owners", I would define this as a list keyed by
owners and which may include a leaf-list of licenses. Rather than defining
license as a choice, I would use a "union".
(6)
OLD:
"ol": {
"owners": [
"Copyright (c) FrobMaster 2021. All Rights Reserved"
],
"spdx-tag": "0BSD"
},
NEW:
"ietf-ol:ol": {
"owners": [
"Copyright (c) FrobMaster 2021. All Rights Reserved"
],
"spdx-tag": "0BSD"
},
(7) Please update the IANA section as follows:
OLD:
The IANA is requested to add "ol" to the MUD extensions registry as
follows:
Extension Name: ol
Standard reference: This document
NEW:
The IANA is requested the following entry to the MUD extensions registry
available at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/mud/mud.xhtml#mud-extensions
Extension Name: ol
Reference: This document
(8) Please update the IANA section with the following:
NEW
This document requests IANA to register the following URI in the "ns"
subregistry within the "IETF XML Registry" [RFC3688]:
URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-ol
Registrant Contact: The IESG.
XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.
This document requests IANA to register the following YANG module in
the "YANG Module Names" subregistry [RFC6020] within the "YANG
Parameters" registry.
name: ietf-ol
namespace: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-ol
maintained by IANA: N
prefix: ol
reference: RFC XXXX
===
Cheers,
Med
> -----Message d'origine-----
> DeΒ : OPSAWG <[email protected]> De la part de Henk Birkholz
> Envoyé : lundi 4 octobre 2021 22:00
> ΓΒ : opsawg <[email protected]>
> ObjetΒ : [OPSAWG] π WG Adoption Call for draft-lear-opsawg-ol-01
>
> Dear OPSAWG members,
>
> this starts a call for Working Group Adoption of
>
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-lear-opsawg-ol-01
>
> ending on Monday, October 18th.
>
> As a reminder, this I-D describes an extension to MUD that allows MUD file
> authors to specify ownership and licenses in the MUD files themselves. The
> corresponding YANG augment defined can be used outside the scope of MUD as
> well.
>
> Please reply with your support and especially any substantive comments you
> may have.
>
>
> For the OPSAWG co-chairs,
>
> Henk
>
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