Hi all, Many thanks to the authors for the effort put into this document.
I think that the document is better compared to the last time I reviewed it. However, I think that some changes are needed to better articulate the intended behavior and overall operation. I had to jump several times between the terminology section (and some key elements in the introduction) and the core text to digest the concept that are being discussed. The flow can be worked better. FWIW, some more detailed comments can be seen at: * pdf: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.doc Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG <[email protected]> De la part de Tianran Zhou Envoyé : mercredi 8 juin 2022 12:00 À : [email protected] Objet : [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03 Hi WG, This mail we start a two weeks working group last call for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture/ Please send over your comments before June 22. Please also indicate if you think this document is ready to progress. Cheers, Tianran, on behalf of chairs _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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