Hi Med,
Many thanks for your deep review.
We agreed with most comments, which we are busy inserting in a new version.
The only comment I would not keen on acting upon is to change the
title. However, you have a good point that we should mention earlier in
the doc that this architecture is based on a YANG module, in a companion
document. We'll introduce this.
Regards, Benoit
On 6/20/2022 4:11 PM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote:
Hi all,
Many thanks to the authors for the effort put into this document.
I think that the document is better compared to the last time I
reviewed it. However, I think that some changes are needed to better
articulate the intended behavior and overall operation. I had to jump
several times between the terminology section (and some key elements
in the introduction) and the core text to digest the concept that are
being discussed. The flow can be worked better.
FWIW, some more detailed comments can be seen at:
* pdf:
https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.pdf
<https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.pdf>
* doc:
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.doc
Cheers,
Med
*De :* OPSAWG <opsawg-boun...@ietf.org> *De la part de* Tianran Zhou
*Envoyé :* mercredi 8 juin 2022 12:00
*À :* opsawg@ietf.org
*Objet :* [OPSAWG] WGLC for
draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03
Hi WG,
This mail we start a two weeks working group last call for
draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture/
Please send over your comments before June 22.
Please also indicate if you think this document is ready to progress.
Cheers,
Tianran, on behalf of chairs
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