On 5/22/2023 7:10 PM, Aitken, Paul wrote:

1) Yes, 5.1.9.1. could be renumbered to 5.2. But also modify the name to "New IPFIX IPv6 SRH Segment Type Subregistry", similar to the name of section 5.1. "New SRH Information Elements".

Also watch for confusion between section 3's title and section 5.1:

    3.  New SRv6 IPFIX Information Elements
    5.1.  New SRH Information Elements


2) I specifically asked for the Expert Reviewers to be named, for two reasons:

    1. Each registry lists the "Registration Procedure(s)" (Expert Review) and the corresponding "Expert(s)" (IE Doctors) - so it's necessary to provide both pieces of information.     2. Without specifying "SRH Experts", it might incorrectly be assumed that "IE Doctors" will be the expert reviewers.
I don't think the AD & IESG are knowledge enough to select the right persons :-)

Regards, Benoit


P.


On 22/05/2023 09:38, thomas.g...@swisscom.com wrote:
Dear Med,

Thanks a lot.

Regarding your feedback on expert review, for me valid and ok but I am waiting 
on Paul's feedback if that make sense to him as well.

Regarding, IPFIX IPv6 SRH Segment Type Subregistry. I believe the section is 
related to the srhIPv6ActiveSegmentType section. Therefore in the all the 
previous revisions of the document it was listed that way. For me to list it 
either under 5.1.9.1 or 5.2 works. Since it is the IANA section, lets get the 
opinion from Paul as well. I will adjust then accordingly.

Best wishes
Thomas

-----Original Message-----
From:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Sent: Monday, May 22, 2023 8:50 AM
To:opsawg@ietf.org; Graf Thomas, INI-NET-VNC-HCS<thomas.g...@swisscom.com>
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Subject: RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-10.txt

Hi Thomas,

I think there was a bug in -10:

s/5.1.9.1.  IPFIX IPv6 SRH Segment Type Subregistry/5.2  IPFIX IPv6 SRH Segment 
Type Subregistry


Also, for this text:

   The allocation policy of this new subregistry is Expert Review       
   (Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]) by SRH Experts.

I don't think we need to have ".. by SRH Experts" mentioned here given that the 
assigned DEs for this subregistry are IMO required to be familiar with SRH.

If you think this is obvious and has to be recorded in the draft, I suggest the 
following:

(1)

OLD
   The allocation policy of this new subregistry is Expert Review       
   (Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]) by SRH Experts.

NEW:
   The allocation policy of this new subregistry is Expert Review       
   (Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]).

(2)

OLD:
   The guidelines that are being followed by the designated experts for ...

NEW:
  The designed experts for this registry should be familiar with SRH.
  The guidelines that are being followed by the designated experts for ..


Thanks.

Cheers,
Med

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    Title           : Export of Segment Routing over IPv6
Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
    Authors         : Thomas Graf
                      Benoit Claise
                      Pierre Francois
    Filename        : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-10.txt
    Pages           : 28
    Date            : 2023-05-18

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    Information Elements to identify a set of Segment Routing over
IPv6
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