Hi, John, Thanks so much for your feedback! Please find my comments in-line....
On 11/30/2012 02:26 AM, John Schiel wrote: > A few nits: > > * Third paragraph in the introduction, "One one hand". Perhaps "On one hand" ? Yep. Fixed! > * Title of section 2 should be fully bolded, missing bold on 'Techniques' This is an artifact of the tools at http://tools.ietf.org which d the automatic conversion from TXT to HTML (I will report this to the tool authors) -- the source itself (TXT) does not support formatting: <http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-gont-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-02.txt> > * 3.1.1.4. Stable Privacy-Enhanced Addresses > > In response to the predictability issues discussed in Section 3.1.1.1 > and the privacy issues discussed in , the IETF is currently ** > (discussed in what,3.1.1.2? ) I'd say "draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses". Thanks! Best regards, -- Fernando Gont SI6 Networks e-mail: [email protected] PGP Fingerprint: 6666 31C6 D484 63B2 8FB1 E3C4 AE25 0D55 1D4E 7492 _______________________________________________ OPSEC mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsec
