On Mon, Dec 16, 2013 at 10:15 AM, Michael Behringer (mbehring) <
[email protected]> wrote:

> Warren, [sorry for late reply]
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Warren Kumari [mailto:[email protected]]
> > Sent: 04 December 2013 18:16
> > To: Michael Behringer (mbehring)
> > Cc: Warren Kumari; Dobbins, Roland; [email protected]
> > Subject: Re: [OPSEC] Review of draft-ietf-opsec-lla-only-05
> [...]
> > I have read all the versions of this document and think that the tone has
> > greatly improved, but feel that section 2.5 (Summary) still has a bit too
> > much of the "this is a good idea" feel. Personally I think that the
> Summary
> > section doesn't really add anything to the document and should be
> > dropped.
>
> So I've been told throughout school and uni that a document should have
> intro, body and summary; I'm feeling somewhat reluctant to drop a summary,
> it just seems wrong. :-)  Let's see whether we can get one that "feels"
> right. What about:
>
>    Using exclusively link-local addressing on infrastructure links has a
> number
>    of advantages and disadvantages, which are both described in detail
>    in  this document. A network operator can use this document to
>    evaluate whether using link-local addressing on infrastructure links
>    is a good idea in the context of his/her network or not. This document
>    makes no particular recommendation either in favour or against.
>
> I think this should be balanced, would you agree?
>

Sorry for the large delay in responding -- vacations and similar made this
scroll off the bottom of the mailbox / todo pile...

Yup, that covers it well enough for me... would be even better if y'all
spelt 'favor' correctly <winks and runs away>

W


>
> Michael
>
>
>
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