Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I echo Barry's "nice document", and would support the changes he suggested. I did notice what I believe is a repeated "not" in "it is not not only the lowest-order byte". In this text: 3.4.1. Remote IPv6 Network Scanners Many address scanning tools such as nmap [nmap2012] do not even support sweeping an IPv6 address range. ^ does this mean "sweeping an IPv6 address range in a remote IPv6 network"? I think that's implicit from the section title, but what nmap supports is clearer in the corresponding text in the next section: 3.4.2. Local IPv6 Network Scanners There are a variety of publicly-available local IPv6 network scanners: o Current versions of nmap [nmap2012] implement this functionality. _______________________________________________ OPSEC mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsec
